Omegaton wrote:Hopefully this doesn't come off as too harsh...
Was that the first pass, or did you do sketches first and then draw over it? I'll admit I'm fairly dependent on sketches (my sister draws pretty good art without doing any sketches and I just don't understand how she does it), however, IMO sketches help a ton to get an idea of the drawing before doing the lineart.
You've got some proportions starting to come together, but I think you need to keep practicing your proportions and anatomy. I can see you're hiding one of the hands since, I assume, you're uncomfortable drawing them (this is a fairly common cheat and I've done it too). Anatomy and proportions are covered in tons of how-to-draw books because of just how important it is.
Also, I can't actually tell what she's holding on her head.
Oh, it was complex, I drawn a sketch, put the sketched drawing on the tablet and traced it. Then used magic on the software.
Thank you, this idea feels awesome now.
Imma go start anatomy now